5've
well, now some suggestions:
-Improve sound: Kid has no voice at all, he doesn't pant he doesn't get scared he is just totally mute
The guy in mask has a hard to understand voice (I know there are subtitles but why should you need them, right?)
-Animation:
Some parts you did really well and clean, others were just well animated but needed a bit more cleaning (or so I think)
Some parts have a lot of flow of animation then a long part of stills, really breaking the flow of the animation
Plot:
Seems interesting but, something made in flash may need the plot unleashing a bit faster
I think I may sound a bit harsh but I want you to do an awesome job on Rat 3
5'd. Congrats on releasing it, animation was good, but I've got some pet peeves about it.
The plot doesn't seem to go anywhere. You're obviously building something up, and there's nothing wrong with that, but you really should give the audience something more to follow.
The fbf was great, but the camera movement tweens lacked at places. This is probably just me since I'm an absolute camera movement and easing whore though.
It wasn't what I expected and I got some complaints but overall congratulations on such a good job.
I want, if you don't mind, to "criticize" Rat 2 as soon as '09 hits in for me since one of my resolves for this year is to try to be as critical with other's works as I am with mine (to try and stop being stupidly critical all around and just get stuff out of planning).
I'll write a journal or PM you the link to a blog I plan to set up for this matter when I finish with it, but again, very good job.
CardboardtubeNinja Says:
Epic.
Hellucard Says:
Dude! Great work! =o
Galloglasses Says:
WHY IS THIS NOT ON THE FRONT PAGE!?
Arturo Says:
5've
well, now some suggestions:
-Improve sound: Kid has no voice at all, he doesn't pant he doesn't get scared he is just totally mute
The guy in mask has a hard to understand voice (I know there are subtitles but why should you need them, right?)
-Animation:
Some parts you did really well and clean, others were just well animated but needed a bit more cleaning (or so I think)
Some parts have a lot of flow of animation then a long part of stills, really breaking the flow of the animation
Plot:
Seems interesting but, something made in flash may need the plot unleashing a bit faster
I think I may sound a bit harsh but I want you to do an awesome job on Rat 3
giascle Says:
Awesome, but like Arturo said, it's way too little plot development.
th1rt3en Says:
5'd. Congrats on releasing it, animation was good, but I've got some pet peeves about it.
The plot doesn't seem to go anywhere. You're obviously building something up, and there's nothing wrong with that, but you really should give the audience something more to follow.
The fbf was great, but the camera movement tweens lacked at places. This is probably just me since I'm an absolute camera movement and easing whore though.
Again congrats and I look forward to Rat 3.
Z A T E C H Says:
(+ 0.0011)
BladeYang Says:
It wasn't what I expected and I got some complaints but overall congratulations on such a good job.
I want, if you don't mind, to "criticize" Rat 2 as soon as '09 hits in for me since one of my resolves for this year is to try to be as critical with other's works as I am with mine (to try and stop being stupidly critical all around and just get stuff out of planning).
I'll write a journal or PM you the link to a blog I plan to set up for this matter when I finish with it, but again, very good job.