Revenge- The Begining

by Surface

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Revenge- The Begining

Title: Revenge
Author: Surface
Fandom: N/A
Time line: In 2006
Characters: Jackson, Jesse, Revenge
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Category: Mystery, Action/ Adventure, Drama,
Summary: A Troubled Horse, To A Furious Killer

Chapter 1:

Wild Horse Stable-

In was February 16th 2006, Jackson was starting to get the stable up and running and still need to find one more horse for the stables. She owned Wild Horse Stables, and used as a place for people to lease and ride on the trails that head down to the river. Wild Horse Stables was located in Oregon.
On that very morning Jackson got up and got dressed for the big day. She walked outside and said, %u201CJesse %u201D Jesse looked over his shoulder and saw her. So he got up and walked over to her, and said, %u201CWhat?%u201D Jackie then said, %u201CDid all the horses get feed, and stalls cleaned?%u201D Jess smirked and said, %u201CYes, I did.%u201D Jackson smiled and said, %u201CGood, why don%u2019t you go get some breakfast?, I have to go into town later.%u201D Jesse said, %u201CYa, I probably will, I probably will go into town with you.%u201D %u201COkay%u201D, she said.

Old Man Barker%u2019s House-

It was currently 8:00 AM, in the morning. One hour after, Jackie and Jesse%u2019s conversation took place. Old Man Barker got up out of his house, and walked outside to his big black American Quarter Horse/American Mustang Gelding. Old Man Barker beat and abused this amazing animal. This horse%u2019s name was, Revenge. The old man walked over to this so called Revenge horse, and feed him
Once he was done, he saw Jackie and Jess driving up in the pick-up truck with the trailer. Old Man Barker owns the best tack shop and feed store in the whole town, and had a pretty good reputation, but no one knew about what he did to his animals.

Barker%u2019s Feed and Tack Shop-

Once Barker saw Jess and Jackie driving up, he walked into his shop and sat down at the register. He saw Jackie and Jess come walking in. %u201CHello Mrs. Parker, can I get you something.%u201D Jackie looked at him and said, %u201CJust the usual feed supplies, Jeff.%u201D Jeff said, %u201COkay, just hang on one minute, oh ya, your saddle is outside.%u201D %u201COkay, Jackie%u201D, Jackie said.
Jackie walked to the back door and opened it. She then walked over to her saddle and saw how nice it was, then she looked up and saw the black gelding..She said to herself, %u201CNow that is one fine horse.%u201D Barker then walked out the door and said, %u201CYou like the saddle?%u201D Jackie looked at him startled and said, %u201CYes it is lovely Jeff, thank you. How much do you want for your black gelding?%u201D Jeff looked at her shockingly, %u201CI would at least want 1,500 for that horse.%u201D Jackie said, %u201CPay the man, Jess..%u201D %u201COkay%u201D, Jess said, and walked over and started to write the check for the horse.
As Jesse was writing the check, Jackson grabbed her black halter and walked over the black gelding%u2019s stall. She opened it and said, %u201CEasy boy, I am not gonna hurt ya.%u201D The horse was breathing heavily, and slowly walked over to Jackie. Jackie walked a little toward his as well, and put the halter on him, and began to walk him over to her six horse trailer. She pulled him in, and he walked right in. She shut the doors to the trailer, and said, %u201CJess, you ready?%u201D %u201CYa, I am Jackie%u201D, he replied back. She then said, %u201COkay then let%u2019s get home, we don%u2019t wanna put to much stress on the horse.%u201D Jess said goodbye to Jeff and walked to the truck and got in on the passenger side. Jackson then started the truck and drove off.

Wild Horse Stable%u2019s-

Jackie and Jess finally pulled back into Wild Horse Stable%u2019s after a one hour drive back from the feed and tack store. They went and parked the trailer right in front of there pasture and pulled slightly into it. Jackie got up opened it and brought the big black horse right out. They then took his halter off and he ran off into the pasture.
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Jul 23rd 2006
Tags:
a a furious horse killer mystery to troubled western
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Alright, Revenge is a Mystery story I am writing about a abused horse, who was recently sold, and is now coming back from trail rides, riderless.

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Tioga Says:

Ohhh, can't wait for the rest. fav