and the wounds grow deeper

by TheMagicTalkingWall

in Completed Works

< 'Get Blue Spheres: 46' by TheMagicTalkingWall

and the wounds grow deeper

a street all too familiar
the lights are all broken
you stop and turn to me
scared and bleeding
a hand, i reach out
slapped away

and the wounds grow deeper

all i ever wanted
all i truly needed
i thought you were happy
lies and deceit only go so far
when the spotlight shown the truth
you ran
you ran to them

and the wounds grow deeper

you could of had everything
but i understood
pushed away
shoved away
cast the first stone
it broke nothing
confused
shocked
you ran to me

the blood runs down my face
i taste blood

i didn't want to hurt you
the sword i always knocked away
you picked it up
you ran at me
years of experience
i saw your moves
your technique
the only thing you know in life

i knew what you were going to do
i hoped you didn't
i hoped i was wrong
horror
i let it hit me anyways

the blood is on my hands
stained
forever red
pollutes the puddles under my feet

i wanted nothing more
i wanted nothing less
you attacked
you put on the assault

and the wounds grow deeper
it's in my skin
i wanted so much more
wounds grow deeper
i can't get out
i don't hate you
deeper
i can see it

and the wounds grow deeper
deeper
> 'Not for Resale' by TheMagicTalkingWall

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Jul 18th 2006
Tags:
deeper grow human nature narrative romance spiritual wounds
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Comments

Neo Arcane Says:

Nice poem, was it from a song you were listening to?

Sephi Kitsune Says:

Awesome. I think it really flows great

Prismind Says:

wow. truly, emotions are expressed in many ways in this poem

NilokHedge Says:

Very Deep, sounds like you have had a bad day Psy. I'm sure cailen can chear you up.

Vampie Queen Says:

Wow...that's some seriously beautiful writing.

Whatever happened, I hope everything turns out okay, baby. I love you.

Golem Avalanche Says:

Cruds, man, that's awesome. Seems like some powerful emotions are behind this.

Unknowngamer Says:

You know, you should really consider putting one of your poems to music.