YES!!! I did a realism....And no, it's not for school. Omuhgosh. This is Masasfumi Gotoh, the lead singer of Asian Kung-Fu Generation. My favorite band in the whole world

I would love it if someone critiqued this, PLEASE!!! I need the help. Any tips on realism drawing? Please tell me. Seriously, it's rare I ask for critique, so take up the opportunity, people :3
http://www.akfgfan.com/pictures/akfgmag105.jpg
That's the image I used. Mmmyes, Gotoh-san = Shmex. And don't you dare oppose me D<
Masafumi Gotoh belongs to himself
Art is mine
Reference picture from http://www.akfgfan.com/ [Which is also where I got my desktop

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Comments
Chanrom Says:
your good...
LAEluu Says:
Hnn. It looks really good for the first shot (on here, at least). You need to add some more darkness around the head on the black-side. Also, never. Rush. Ever. I see you did on the pure-black part; smudge that with a Kleenex like there's no tomorrow. Don't over-smudge on the other parts (you did very well with that, I see), but you need to add a bit more of the smudge-power to his hair, and make the top of his head more roundish. :] You must've worried too much about the face to get the rest of it picture-perfect.
Hehe. I do it, too. Rushing is sooo tempting, but it just messes things up. 
StrawberryDeath Says:
[ Kyahh! lead singer of the best band in the world!]
[ Awesome! I think you need to deffinatly make the black part darker. and maybe use softer lines for the hair, but it's pretty good!]