notes yes.
-Read right to left.
-I drew these 3 pages weeks ago. Before I started loosening up my style a bit more... hence the stiff positions ;;>>
-I stuck the two profile-panels in page 8 because otherwise it would have been a while before I got to mentioning their names oo;
-The bottles/etc behind the bar are crap. I know this.
-Hikari isn't the main characters real name. Just a nickname.
-Yes I'm aware that the way I draw Hikari is horribly inconsistent. Especially in the hair and eyes. Im working on it.
-I'm gonna have to update these pages at a quicker pace .__.
...please be gentle on any critiques .__.
Comments
cyberninja jacobious Says:
Once again, awesome job.
ZioZarode Says:
Great pages, but dammit? D: It doesn't help much if you are going to use the actual curse word to dumb it down. >_>; It just feels immature if you do. Still, great pages.
Kakurine Says:
X3 Gawd, I love their expressions in this!.
And the bottom right pannel makes me giggle. 
This comic looks rather interesting. :3 Can't wait to see more! ^^
Jeffk38uk Says:
This is a comment for pg 7-9. Great progression with the comic. Its a nice twist to show the two are actually friends and working together, which makes the situation all the more hilarious. Art style is great onc again with some good detail and tones.
stickymonkeydemon Says:
hey...you should try and enter rising stars of manga..
if u havent already...
gret stuff
Chazzie Says:
Hmm, I just read through your first 10 pages. Very nice. I love it so far.