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Curse
Gone without a trace,
No memory,my life a mystery,
Trying so hard to remember,
My forgotten history,
Fading memories,
As my mind has no time,
To collectively find all feelings,
And thoughts, that were once mine,
So what is this feeling,
Of pure hatred and curse?
I feel my emotion leaving my soul,
As my dying love does dispurse,
My mind is clouded,
How i long to be free,
It is time i founght back,
And claimed my sanity,
So now i must fight,
I will not retreat,
The curse grows ever stronger,
Threatening my defeat.
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Comments
reb29 Says:
Very nice poem! I don't know who the picture belongs to, though.
~reb29
Hikara Productions Says:
Beautiful peom, though there was one little itty bitty typo. XP Whoever did do it was an excellent artist.
Paralysis Says:
eh....It is nice and all...but all of the sappy, solemn, crap is getting n my nerves....I prefer things that haven't been done five billion times
JadedEmeralde Says:
nice poem. very beautiful.
Nanook Says:
Not bad, but I agree with DC. It is somewhat overdone- come on, GOD69! You're a poetic god! Use the power of your words!
Sanchu Says:
my goodness...this poem is exactly how I felt about losing my memory back in feb...I'm a bit better now but at first it was extremely nerve racking...
Wow, that is REALLY good. The picture and the poem. They are definitly favorites.
shadychaos Says:
i know its not ur pic but can i still fave it? ^^
Sanura Says:
I love the poem and the pic.!!
Azndude Says:
Utawarerumono is the game/series. If you still around.