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c-a-n-'-t
I can't live up to your standards
Because you're suffocating me
I can't be that pretty girl
Because that's not who I am supposed to be
I can't be that A student
because it seems to pointless
I can't be that Optimistic
Because I am a realist
I can't not be Vulgar
Because I don't like to hold my tounge
I can't be that open minded
Because I like to think I'm never wrong
I can't walk away from a fight
Because I have to Much Pride
I can't not be rude
Because I try to say what's on my mind
I can't say no to pressure
So I had some cigarettes
I can't like saying sorry
So I pretend that I forget
I can't let people get too close
Because then they know too much
I can't not talk shit
I dont know when to keep my mouth shut
I can't always pay attention
I mostly rely on my luck
I can't help but feel like you're dissapointed
Because I'm really just not good enough
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Comments
Burning Vigil Says:
wow, awsome job, definatley one of your best./seriously i liek it alot
Bang Says:
your an awesome writer. i love this. fav
2quillmadness Says:
If I'd have known you's in highschool I'd have raised hell with you chica *nods*
Rock on.
Byte Says:
This reminds me of myself.
Fave.
Silence A Voice Says:
This reminds me of my boyfriend...haha I like it.
Jigglesbig Says:
AWWWWWW...
for Atari.
cheese Says:
i completely agree! you write amazingly!
ZiggyBuggy Says:
Heh. Sounds a bit like me.
But always remember: It's easier to ask for forgiveness than it is to ask for permission.
Much easier.
Reminds me of...me. Especially the whole bits of
"I can't not be rude
Because I try to say what's on my mind"
And stuff. Like that.
jexeneko Says:
easy poem to relate to, and honestly, there werent too many grammatical errors ^^...and i ma grammar freak...><;;
but yeah, very well written, I envy the skills joo possess ^^
Wall Flower Says:
I really like this, the repetition is used really well :) - I like you style of writing ^-^
I can see a few mistakes, but nothing tragic.
also, love the photo