It Rained Harder :poetry:

by SlothyGothy

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It Rained Harder :poetry:

You once told me
That it wasn't right
That was when it started to drizzle slowly
Even though the sun still shined bright.

That drizzle turned to a fast shower
Right when I saw you that next day
I brought you my last red flower
While you just turned away.

Days flew past me throughout the rain
I tried to talk to you again
As my heart writhed in pain
Yet it still rained harder.

That was when it turned to a storm,
Threatening to flood
When you finally told me to just give up
I think I almost drowned in the deep mud.

I don't know what it turned into next
It just rained harder,
Those small droplets hitting the ground like spears
That%u2019s when I realized;

They were simply a reflection of my tears.
> 'Time to Burn' by SlothyGothy

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Feb 24th 2006
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A poem I made last night. First thought up of it when I was driving to my violin lesson and it was raining. Yeah.

Image (C) me.

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the infamous paper Says:

awww, i love that! The image and the words.... pierce my heart and leave me to die! I love the imagery and the rhyming bits... such a beautiful piece!

And to help you out, one poet to another: you may want to fix this: "That%u2019s when I realized". It does that to me a lot too. ^^ beautiful work!

Animayqueen Says:

Very sad, but I love it.