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Le tranger?
Fallen Angel
not meant to be
She loves you
But you love me
I don't deserve you
You're too good.
If I could keep you
You know I would
But all my life
I've been deprived
I know you'll leave
but Ive survived
Much worse than heartache
Much worse than pain
If you keep me, What will you gain?
Ive sold my body
There's nothing left
keeping you would be a theft.
But you are mine now
but You can leave me
I will allow
You say you love me.
Is it true?
It doesnt matter, cause I love you.
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Comments
xRainbowx Says:
I like it. The poem and the picture. The go really good together.
Kally Says:
Wow...amazing words. Love the picture, too.
Raven Wings Says:
This seems a lot like something fransisco would write it is really good.
Tameki Says:
Beautiful
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[my first comment on SA
Devo Face Says:
its all awesome but what did you use for the picture?
Nanook Says:
A little typical, espicially the rhyme scheme. Another thing-- In writing, abbreviating "because" to "'cause" is not generally encouraged.
Romeo Says:
I love it. The last two verses were a bit ordinary, but the overall poem is great!