Beautiful.
a daily deviationn here?
I like the flow of the first verse, but it's just a little TOO short to be a free-standing poem. Maybe an opening to an essay or novel or something?
No. It's not too short. Poem.
Nice poem ^^
its a nice little verse..... good job
Lovely! Good luck with your book!
Nicely done, enjoy how it's short and sweet, would be great for an opening to a book or whatever you use it for.
wow i really like this!! Good luck with everything!
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Shadow Link Says:
Beautiful.
azzumail Says:
a daily deviationn here?
Nanook Says:
I like the flow of the first verse, but it's just a little TOO short to be a free-standing poem. Maybe an opening to an essay or novel or something?
whatever nevermiind Says:
No. It's not too short. Poem.
B MyValentine Says:
Kit19 Says:
Nice poem ^^
LillianaSapphire Says:
its a nice little verse..... good job
SickOftheBlade Says:
Bloody Says:
Nicely done, enjoy how it's short and sweet, would be great for an opening to a book or whatever you use it for.
aserene Says:
wow i really like this!! Good luck with everything!