I recently recieved one of those types of gifts that means more, in it's own little way, then you can really feasibley put into words - because it's so heartfelt and perfect in it's intentions, you know you'll love it for as long as it's around. *ren52 mailed me this awesome little sketchbook - and by little, I mean roughly 5 1/2 x 8 1/2 inches, cute sort of little, that literally makes for a perfect fit in my smock pocket at work - its size lets me haul it around pretty much everywhere, so I have this newfound determination to put it to as much use as possible. I've dubbed the MSB - the Mini Sketch Book. This is a Mel in love, baby.
I'll post pages as I get them done - not every one, per say, and maybe not in order, but I'll try and keep things flowing with it where and when I can.
Started this image at work, and finished it when I got home this evening. Not a whole lot of time invested, because the style itself calls for quick movement. It's fun. Anyway, for the first page, I decided to illustrate... a first. I jokingly refer to it as Kayo and Sabretooth's "first date", because as you can see... Victor is SUCH a charmer.
....yeeeahnotsomuch.
In NXU verse the pair have know eachother since Kayo was fifteen. This scene literally takes place withing the first 24 hours of that remarkbley crooked relationship.
"A bustling, grubby, smoke-asphyxiated road side eatery annexed to the crooked little convenience store. Cheyenne found herself practically glued to Creed's flank, eyes wide, heart pounding as he all but shoved his way through the seedy venue, chock full of the type of urban, truck-cabin scum that she had spent months on the run trying to avoid. They were everywhere - she could smell them. Danger looming about in bulky coats and flannels and faded threadbare Levis. Dangerous to her, anyway, she gathered, as Creed seem to barely register their presence as he bouldered his way for the neared booth, the thick smokey air practically folding around him in waves. They certainly were no threat in his mind. While shifty sneers were cast her way, the strangers practically dove under the table in efforts to avoid the Monster Man's gaze. Cheyenne found this rather amusing."
That is not to say that, upon further inspection and a lingeringly creepy conversation, Cheyenne isn't a bit... freaked out. She's still in a marked amount of pain from the first flow-blown exposition of her pyrokinetic capabilities through an already rather unhealthy body, her arms now wrapped against the burns from exactly that.... nevermind the fact that the feral man before her was completely ripped up by a barrage of artilary less than four hours prior, and he's now skulking about with a few minor cuts... cuts of which she's watching literally mend themself as he speaks. What's worse is the way he keeps staring at her... sniffing her out...
Chey:
"What?"
Vic: *sneers* "Isn't every day y'see th' devils' eyes on a drowned rat."
Chey: "... fuck you."
...Now that's love.
Comments
Rokuki Says:
Totally totally awesome. The realism is mind blowing and the expressions really work with what's going on. I love it. you get a : fav:
elle Says:
Wow, the atmosphere and expression is incredibly vibrant and tangible. Amazing work!
kenly Says:
this is great! and so tiny! i cannot WAIT for the next 'issue'!
SisterGoat Says:
Great detail and expressions going on between the characters.
IZRA Says:
funktastic shading. and no smudges *gasp*. you deserve a Fav. HUZZAAH!
Ren52 Says:
MELLLLLLLLLL WTF. This made me gasp and get all tingly. ROFL. I figured you'd be using that sketchbook for random doodles, maybe a TKP headshot/mug here n' there... If I'd known THIS was the kind of stuff you'd crank out with it, I would have bought you 10. LMAO. Seriously woman, WTF, this is insane. I don't even do pieces this complete and shaded in my FULL-sized sketchbooks.


OMG you own at panelling at telling a story with expressions. I didn't even have to read the dialogue to know Chey was saying "What?", Victor was replying with something snarky, and then Chey goin' all *rassem frassem*. THE FACES. Great work. The little details mean everything, like the frizzy strands of Chey's hair, her exhausted eyes, and her surprisingly accurate features (i.e. she totally looks like herself at the age of 15). I was wondering what was up with Creed's scars but I understand now. :) UNNNGH WTF you draw him impossibly hot, this brings me much squee. His mouth, his fuzz, his hair, his eyes, his body language -- *swoon*. Murdering monster or not, I'd take him home to momma!
The environment is great -- it does look like a cheap roadside diner, with the tiny cramped booths. The sugar shaker, the menu, napkin dispenser, the wood grain, the blinds, the darkness outside........ man, you rule. I'm also constantly amazed by your inclusion of the cigarettes, pack, lighter, and ashtrays. I mean, really, I always just draw the cig itself, I always forget to include the other stuff. lol.
BWAHAHAHAH and he blows the smoke RIGHT in her face! That's killer. Tells a whole other story outside of the dialogue right there.
I love this SO MUCH, and am literally dancing with glee that it was the lil' sketchbook I sent you that resulted in this awesomeness! And you SHADED IT ALL. I'm still drooling. SHAAAAAAAADING.
I need for this to be on my wall. Like woah. JPG me, baby!
*eats your brains* MELTALENT.
live technicolor Says:
that's great. xD
draggles Says:
the layout, proportions, shading... everything is great. ^^
And it's funny.
fuzzylogic Says:
*Blasks in the artistic glory radiating from the piece*
This be marvellous! That expression from sabertooth is simply....irresistible! There are soo many beautiful little subtleties in their faces *sits and stares*
crome Says:
holy crap detail!!!!!!!!