Thy Naked Sword

by Majic510

in Completed Works

Thy Naked Sword

Thy Naked Sword
1-29-06

Sitting on the floor
Holding a blanket over me
Block up the door and don%u2019t let them see
Because I%u2019m naked underneath

Hiding through my defenses
Surrounded by walls
And closed fences
Holding me so I won%u2019t fall

Hold up these walls
But the bricks are breaking
Push back these faults
Can%u2019t let my tears reveal me

Concealed behind
The veil my mother gave me
Take these thoughts and bur them
So I can live forever in my dreams

Put the past out of sight
I%u2019m no longer strong enough to fight
Go underground and disappear
Until these shadows have cleared

Hold up these walls
But the bricks are breaking
Push back these faults
Can%u2019t let my tears reveal me

Sitting on the floor
Holding a blanket over me
Block up the door and don%u2019t let them see
Because I%u2019m naked underneath

Sharp and jagged
Held by a stone-covered heart
Slender and lethal
Wounds could be fatal
My weapon protects me
Shields me from what I deny
But thy sword is worn
And has cracks of its own
It%u2019s broken, lying freely open
And naked just like me

Hold up these walls
But the bricks are breaking
Push back these faults
Can%u2019t let my tears reveal me
But my broken mask exposes all
> 'Don't do crack' by Majic510
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Mature Jan 29th 2006
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lyric naked sword
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-one, the picture I picked I used because I think it goes with the lyric very well. I take my pictures and any body figure as an art form. And besides, I think the composition's pretty neat with a black background and the cream colored skin that makes an awesome Renaissance effect. Please don't think of me as a whore that sells their body and shit like that because I'm not like that at all. I'm even against American Idol peoples for selling their dignity just to be on TV.
-and two...Kaiya made me do it :-P

Comments

MrFlameThrower Says:

Nice pic. Nice sword censorship...

Kaiya Sumeragi Says:

I love ur boobies!

Bloody angel Says:

you have a beautiful body the contrast with the sword is very cool.

Bloody Says:

I like the lyrics and you have a damn nice body *stares eyes away from picture*

redeemalles Says:

I love how you used the word bur. It's so much stronger than what most people would have choosen to use.
The contrast in the picture is nice, too.

AngelicDemon Says:

wow beautiful body *whistles* and the lyrics are very deep and meaningful.

Big Sephy Says:

^^ you have a gorgeous body. I think of artistic nudity as an art form too. ^^ So not many people will say you're a whore i don't think.

darkshortyx Says:

nice

KyoraSan Says:

Absoolutly beautiful!
I don't think you're a whore!

Kally Says:

Wow...beautiful picture, and very powerful writing. Love it.