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+.I Like Someone Else.+
The pain of rejection,
yet so common.
Still hurts my heart,
the feeling just won't fade.
Those words of dread,
over and over again play in my head.
How do I rid myself of these,
I said that I would and thats what I did.
Thinking my waiting would be rewarded,
it isn't, instead i've been refused what I desire.
Infacuation you might call it,
but to me these are feelings true.
If only he knew, I lash out and thrash about,
Trying to be heard.
those words I heard lured my heart into darkness.
I can't take this,
the pain oh woe me,
the pain.
Gripping my heart is a taloned hand,
squeezing all feeling from it.
Why me I ask?
when do I get to be happy?
Anthony Arnez Hill
Copyright ©2005 Anthony Arnez Hill
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Comments
Amator Says:
beautiful poem this is. It shows alot of emotion in it.
WavesChan Says:
This is a really beautiful poem, I ditto what Amator says, full of emotion, though I hate the vary thought of this filling you describe its Vary nice^-^
Faliat Says:
You are such a talented writer. I've never been rejected because I've never asked such a question before because I feel for nobody. I don't even really understand most other peoples emotions. So if somebody likes me, I probably won't be able to tell either... The curse of autism.
moonlight shadow Says:
i love this poem you got talent...i would never have the nerve to ask that question so i wouldnt know the pain you feel...but at least you had the courage to do that.
aserene Says:
WOW i really like this poem...it clearly conveys the pain and such...excellent job!
Kage No Dorei Says:
Know how that is man, hope you'll feel better in time.
dice Says:
are you both guys?
dice Says:
are you both guys?
overnightparalysis Says:
One of your best so far, love. It got me to cry(cause I know the same feeling. Damn rejection to hell! ;o; ). Cheer up, life's full of love.
CheapHooligan Says:
Its beautiful.