Marina

by Boonide

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Dec 11th 2005
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art fan makers marina mischief
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Something I'm working on and I need opinions on.

So if you have any suggestions to suggest go ahead and suggestify them.

It's Marina from Mischief Makers, I made her legs more megamanish to suit my own tastes.

I'll give the suggestions to flow for a day or so and if nothing then I'll ink it in.

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Blink Says:

Well what kind of suggestions are you looking for? lol

Myself, I would probably increase the angle of the jaw line a little, but that's just me and my own whimsical ways talking. But you certainly have the right idea with everything. Though if you should ever colour this, I would reccomend taking care with where you place your light source(s).

Still, good stuff.

Blink Says:

lol, that's fine then.

And by 'jaw line'... well. You see the chin? Looking at the inside angle, it's maybe 100 degrees (just over 90)? It's fine and all, but I was really struggling for suggestions, so I hit out on this one. Just saying maybe you could make it look a little shallower? 120 degrees perhaps? lol, I really don't know.

Sutaseyu Says:

Aside from needing a little clean up it looks great so far.

I like that you added your own style to it =33