How I Wish

by Retro Blue

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How I Wish

How I wish,
I knew a love.
Sometimes I lay awake at knight,
Wishing for love like many do eternal life.
Athousand years to come,
athousand years to past,
nothing matters for I still wish for a love that is everlast.
To experience love that is true,
is like going through life without a moment that is blue.
Visions of a loving hand to touch my face,
would make my life flow with a godly grace.
To hear a voice of melody,
Is to give me visions that are heavenly.
How I wish someone could show me the meaning of love.
> 'Break' by Retro Blue

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Dec 9th 2005
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This is just another one of my really old poems. I was going through that whole "I don't wanna be alone phase." Which i'm sure that many of you have gone through....but I hope that you all like this one as well as you have enjoyed my previous writtings.

YES I KNOW I SPELLED NIGHT WRONG...I TIRED TO FIX IT BUT IT'S GIVING ME PROBLEMS...thank you WH_Angel for pointing that out to me.

And yes, Psy said I could use her picture....for all of you *bleepers* out there...

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5P0RK Says:

Wow! Thats so pretty! good job!

Prismind Says:

I feel the same

WH Angel Says:

knight<-- wrong form hun. I believe you want night. The one you used refers to the soldiers from medevil days. The one I provided refers to the time of day.

Psys Otousan Says:

Very nice, they would make nice lyrics for a song!

Angeloflonliness3337 Says:

that's really good! I've some poetry in my gallery somewhere that I wrote. Drop by my page and gallery surf until you find some poetry kay?

aserene Says:

i really like it!

Virangelus Says:

I think this one is my favorite of yours :) Definately. Good stuff.

gayawolf Says:

wow totally amazing!