Deadening Flames

by Retro Blue

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Deadening Flames

Screams of Luxurious pain
Haunting voice run within my vains
Deadening flames
of all life they drain
Dieing ghoss with chains that rattle
Dismembered soldiers who died in battle
Flying angels who fall
Hurtling towards the devils call
Demons crawl from cracks abroad
Flying to this heavenly god
An eerie moon red with blood
With my enemies slain
I too am done...
> Black

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Dec 5th 2005
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yet antoher pretty old peom...why i'm putting these old ones up is just beyond me..

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Featured by WH Angel
Dec 6th 2005
An interesting poem that is deep in emotion.

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zekkus Says:

Sweet Gaara kicks ass. Great job though his second outfit is my fav.

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Virangelus Says:

I love the end... that is the best ending you have done thus far.

overnightparalysis Says:

-applause- Another wonderful poem.

platon Says:

^^great great work and great, jut great ;)

Auroriana Says:

-clings to leg- that ish sooooooo awesomeness!