Shadow Of Love

by Retro Blue

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Shadow Of Love

Within this heart resided pain
To fall
These liquid crystals could not refrain
Not only material things were kept
Upon them
Played an act of treason
Fore this other claims a reason
There is no truth within those lies
So no longer regret the day of darkened skies
That shadow
Which plagued every dream
Fear and pain that shadow no longer means
The mind no longer lingers in the past
These dwelling memories
from my head have been cast
Looking to the kindness of another
Maybe this one is the true lover

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Dec 4th 2005
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I wrote this to decribe how I was feeling about finally getting over my ex and moving on and finding someone who was better and treats me better. I'm so sure that many of you can relate to that...

And yes I have Psyconorikan's permission to use this picture...for gods sake the girl is just my real life best friend....

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5P0RK Says:

H: Yay! for getting over your Ex! There are better people out there! Justdont rush searching for them! Time will help you find your love! And Yay to this poem! *claps*

2kool4skool Says:

Very awesome. And I knew the pic was made by Phsy-chan!!

Virangelus Says:

"Maybe this is my one true lover."

I think that one would flow better Yes, but it is your poem and again I only offer humble critique and opinons. I like the mood this one takes on, a lot better indeed.