Death be my embracing
just a means of escaping
All these voices are screaming
having visions f demons
Wishing to end my life
helping all those with endless strife
Screaming in my head
as I lay in an eternal bed
Screams of torturous pain
within this world of masacist vain
Hurting those who I see fit
killing them as they scream in fright
The prince of darkness himself
cowers in fear of my might
Tearing hearts from open chest
shall put some souls yet at rest
Bringing death to those I hate
as I bring an end to their fate
Riping head from tattered torsos
creamating bodies to leave no morsal
From a virgin head I cut their lips
feeding darkness these lifeless strips
Engulfing the worl with hells fire
shall put at rest my greatest desire
Okay this is one of my favorites personally, the first two lines are just so powerful. You use the word "scream" so much, you would do it more justice by finding a few more equally moving words at thesaurus.com.
you break from the rhyme scheme again and yet stick to it at other parts. Is that your personal calling card perhaps?
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Virangelus Says:
Okay this is one of my favorites personally, the first two lines are just so powerful. You use the word "scream" so much, you would do it more justice by finding a few more equally moving words at thesaurus.com.
you break from the rhyme scheme again and yet stick to it at other parts. Is that your personal calling card perhaps?