Memories Long Forgotten

by Retro Blue

in Completed Works

Memories Long Forgotten

This endless Pain inside
of death that has arrived
a lingering of your voice
replays itself in my mind
watching as you lay there cold and stiff
your friendship not a privlage but a gift
Flesh on bones so pale
your soul not to experience hell
Laying there in a crafted box
stairing at your limp crimson locks
The sound of crying
echo through these hollow halls
out in an endless feild of cold gray stone
a man in black give a speech as though a drone
on looking with sarrowful eye's
lowering this box into a six feet hole
A memory is all they are now
not existing in a physical state
Confind in my head an endless debate
Whats this feeling love or hate
my life is full of miseary
when shall it end?
> '+Edo+' by Retro Blue

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Dec 2nd 2005
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Yea, So I wrote this a while ago when I had just lost an uncle of mine...

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Sarah the Strange Says:

sad but great..

kichibo Says:

that fits perfect... everybody dies.

5P0RK Says:

H: Omg....thats so sad and beautiful at the same time! I saw this on the front page and just had to see like it called out to me....Im really glad it did now! Never lose hope! Life will always work out in the end my friend!

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Kairichan Says:

OMG!! O_o THAT LOOKS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cool ^^ i lurv it

Virangelus Says:

Hmm, some parts can get a little iffy. I love the metaphors on this one you did a great job! I say try to concentrate on your rhythm a little.