"Run" Part One

by Yanxie

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"Run" Part One

(Image not done by me. )


The clouds were faded into a dusk gray
the sun subliminal to sight.
The rain
as if dark showers
drench the city in its cold sweat.
Into the city
amdist passing vehicles and buses
stood an individual sheltering
from the harsh rains beneather the porch,
with a look of dismay
his eyes downcast
and a bundle of bright yellow flowers enveloping his dispirited hand
in such a dark, gray world.
It were as if he were in a trance
expecting the worst,
awaiting persecution.
The rain, as it were meant to be soothing
was instead rather, tormenting.
It signaled the end.
The stress.
Disappointment.
Why, he wondered.
Why does he stand here
in the grim rain
for someone he feels has meaning
yet at the same time
has no worth?
The rims of his eyelids melt,
as he could feel himself slowly drowning
in this world he called, "home."
He needed something.
Something to keep him going.
Something that could give him self-worth.
"She" had a name.
But, if only he knew it...
> 'O RLY?' by Yanxie

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Oct 3rd 2005
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This is a story that I thought of while listening to Run by Snow Patrol. I'll be writing this in a series... can't guarantee how long it will be lasting. Hopefully not too long. I'll warn you all however, that I am not the best writer in the world, nor am I even (or ever had been) the best at poetry.

But listening to this song brought inspiration to mind and tears to my eyes. So I ask of you, if you choose to read this, I highly recommend listening to this song. If you don't have it, download it. If you don't download music, now's the time to start your fresh beginnings as a pirate!!

Anyway.

This would be part one of "Run." Critiques, praise, etc. are highly accepted. I recommend it. :) Thank you for reading if you decide to, for I feel this story will have meaning to it.

AND THE ARTIST IS NAMED TIGRENKA OF GFXARTIST.COM

Now stop asking... /sob

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NJB Says:

Well, after two happy things today, I now feel sad...
Beautiful, theres only one other story thats made me feel sad like this, and that was two very experiences Role Play posters doing a "duet" so to speak...
*faves*

Yanxie Says:

Somehow I can't edit my spelling errors. >_< Sorry if you run across any... ROFL.

DarkWulf988 Says:

that is amazing!

ItachiHinata Says:

stunning

italy fox Says:

*goes and downloads song*

This is beautifully written. In concerns with the pictures (I do NOT have a problem with it..), aren't those characters from Final Fantasy X2?

thatgirloverthar Says:

Oh wow. Nice :3

Hey quick question, who is the artist of the image? And where did you get it?

I'd love to check out their art site. ^o^

thatgirloverthar Says:

Oh wow. Nice :3

Hey quick question, who is the artist of the image? And where did you get it?

I'd love to check out their art site. ^o^

sharu Says:

not much of a poetry person myself but i love the picture!

Kally Says:

gahahaha ME LIKEY. The picture I mean...sorry sometimes I don't take the time to read the writing when it's the picture that grabs my attention so well...^.^;; but awesomeness all-around. ^.^

Wellow Says:

You might want to put the link to the artist's site if you didn't ask.