Gate to Heaven

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Oct 30th 2004
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天堂有多远?
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too much Gate of Dawn from Full Metal Alchemist can do this to you...

Happy Halloween! I'm crying for a difference.. let's not make this a scary picture, but one featuring a fallen angel with wings of mist and ears of fins(cuz it rhymes with mist, well.. sort of..)

[Advanced Critique Encouraged]
This user has opted to encourage critique-heavy comments for this deviation in order to better help him or her improve. Critical and non-critical comments are welcome, but critical comments are most appreciated. <--(DA will sue me for this)

Comments

waterdragon Says:

Omg so awesome!! I love everything about it!! And you say it suck! *pork* it doesnt you jerkface.....>_>

how do you do it..? ;__;

I cant see and huge problems so haha! You cant kill me for no critiquing

Hiku Says:

-faves before commenting-

I love the pose and background!!~ Ths moon looks so real, it's so beautiful!!~ -wishes to CG like you-

Her left hand is a bit blurry as in you can't really see the individual fingers but it looks fine if you don't stare at it for hours and hours and hours and...

He left arm should be slightly longer too.
WTF, -kills you-

how can you CG like this?!?

will you teach me? my dear potato-san..

Her legs also look like they slightly slipped off the pillar thing.. <-- brain is dead so has no volcabulary.. T_T

-points above-

I can crit but don't get offended because I could never do what you did.. T_T

a big to my dear potato-san!!~~~~~

Deniruri chan Says:

so pretty and the moon is so shiney I like shiney things and I love the effects too and I would give you crique but I suck wants your skills

argrim Says:

I really like the softness of the colors and the girl is really cute, keep up the good work

potato Says:

I can't CG.. I only steal art from Pchaness then take all the credit! muwahaha..

you don't have to be some awsome professional artist(not that you aren't) to give me crits!

by getting crits I feel that people actually cares and really LOOK at my art ^^; so.. >3 I'm happy.. muwahahahaha.. bring it on!!

crazi8s Says:

damn the details in this is gorgeous, what I love most about it is the wings the lighting th eopacity the shading came out really well and her skin tones are awesome...she reminds me of th ecoloring style of one artist whose name escaped me for th emoment >_< but great work :3

YukinaKid Says:

I love the color and details...... love it so much

SJen Says:

Very pretty shoujo piece. The composition works well, and it seems to be serious, and at the same time innocent and beautiful.

keitty Says:

It's so beautiful.. I love the wings.. >o<
I love how you CG.. and you have choose such a nice colors to her outfit and everything :3 And the background is awesome, I love the moon.. it looks so real
Her arm looks a bit wrong.. I think the shoulder shall be more up.. um.. just try sitting like that and you'll see what I mean ^^' So this way it just looks a bit short ^^'
I don't have more crits xD You did a great job on it

pandachan Says:

This is just.. just so beautiful!
The bg is so nice, and I luff her clothes and the colors too. *w*
And her wings are beautiful too~~
It's perfect!