Spiffy style! But her pussy's a bit too far left. It's along the same curving line that connects from her farthest-away hip to the corner of her closest-to-us hip line- am I making sense? ^^'
you should improve this and since its a work in progress, it shouldn't be difficult to alter it.
The anatomy is bad, so fix it.
The left breast [viewers right] is swinging out too far to the side, in reality breasts would not move like this unless the person was really moving the rest of their body drastically.
The vagina should not stick out from the body - its an internal organ unlike the penis. the way you draw vaginas [which I've noticed in your other pictures too] makes them look diseased, like they have some kind of rash that makes them swell up.
The left arm [viewers right] needs to be thicker for your foreshortening to work.
The male's body also looks unnaturally stretched - almost like he's made of rubber. He needs more bone and muscle definition. His hair also looks a bit dumb, the way its flying out to the side doesn't relate to the way his body is moving so you could work on that to. His leg also looks somewhat too thin, and his waist is too high. Considering his height compared to the female, his torso ought to be longer - unless he has legs like stilts.
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Hiro Says:
Lookin good, keep it up!
AomiArmster Says:
I just adore the forshortening there!
zumzumfoxy Says:
Spiffy style! But her pussy's a bit too far left. It's along the same curving line that connects from her farthest-away hip to the corner of her closest-to-us hip line- am I making sense? ^^'
Jeneni Says:
Can't wait to see it finished!
Soul Hunter Says:
Color it! Fuckin A+ man.
Cha Says:
you should improve this and since its a work in progress, it shouldn't be difficult to alter it.
The anatomy is bad, so fix it.
The left breast [viewers right] is swinging out too far to the side, in reality breasts would not move like this unless the person was really moving the rest of their body drastically.
The vagina should not stick out from the body - its an internal organ unlike the penis. the way you draw vaginas [which I've noticed in your other pictures too] makes them look diseased, like they have some kind of rash that makes them swell up.
The left arm [viewers right] needs to be thicker for your foreshortening to work.
The male's body also looks unnaturally stretched - almost like he's made of rubber. He needs more bone and muscle definition. His hair also looks a bit dumb, the way its flying out to the side doesn't relate to the way his body is moving so you could work on that to. His leg also looks somewhat too thin, and his waist is too high. Considering his height compared to the female, his torso ought to be longer - unless he has legs like stilts.