poem- midnight

by inferno

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< 'The gate' by inferno

poem- midnight

Midnight

midnight, nothing to do
can't stop thinking of you
time's passing
everything is dark
no moon no stars
in the middle of the night

time is passing
still no tomorrow
starts to rain
like tears of the sun
no light at all
everything is dark
in the middle of the night

Endless houghts, no ideas
storm is raging
thunder cracks
like a flashlight
a bit light
not everything is dark
in the middle of the night

now we see
sun is rising
brings light
fights the darkness
now we feel
warmth of the light
can't wait, .. for midnight
> 'Shadow' by inferno

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Oct 22nd 2004
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gracie Says:

That's beautiful!

alice Says:

Very nice.

inferno Says:

thanks :) thanks for the fav ^^

Spooky Kid Says:

wonderful Midnight poem...

DarkRaid Says:

beautiful poem.

black phoenix Says:

simple, yet effective. the image was a nice touch!

i noticed that you comment quite a bit at sheezy.. have you found any exceptional poets that you would be willing to share the names of? i am very interested..

punk chik Says:

Wow that is really good i love poetry!