Cry for Me

by Night J

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< 'Us Against The World' by Night J

Cry for Me

I'm dead, or dying
don't know which
someone please save me
I didn't want it to end like this

Alone in the deafening silence
there's noone here to see
should I wait a moment or two
or I this how it was meant to be

I want someone to cry for me...

Is anybody crying for me

the hurt beating in my body
like drums played too loud from inside
it's ringing in my ears
it's like a blade from which I cannot hide

A gun to my head
dead bullets aimed at my mind
piercing it in a second
searching for the feeling I just cannot find

I want someone to cry for me...

Is anybody crying for me

A white sheet over my face
life gone like the wind
did I lose it like a pair of car keys
is it lost, was that a sin

I feel something coming over me
grey clouds taking control of the pitch black sky
I find some comfort in the feeling
take me away, just let me fly

hear the sound of dripping water
silver threads of icy rain
the only proof of my existence
may it wash away the numbing pain

I want someone to cry for me...

Is anybody crying for me

Is this it, the end of my life
the voice in my head says it's not
I'll make it through this hour, the edge of the knife
it's not meant for me to lay here and rot

like new born wings,
something in me has changed
I'm not alone anymore
the blade's finally out of range

I want someone to smile for me...

Is anybody smiling for me
> 'Is it Riku - Colored' by Night J

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Feb 18th 2005
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just some random stuff I wrote.

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kasubi Says:

not bad, i like it. :)

Nightowl10175 Says:

hear the sound of dripping water
silver threads of icy rain
the only proof of my existence
may it wash away the numbing pain



I loved that stanza, and the way the poem ended. Good Job.

ArrowKitty Says:

It emits lyric vibes. It'd make a very pretty song...I like it, good job. ^^..