Feb 3rd 2005
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This week comic, ill try really hard to update this comic every thursday. Another thing not every week there will be a 2 page comic, so pleses be pacient, especially with the first chapter, this chapter will be kina slow in the story wise but i promises by the mid of the secound one the figth will beging to come out. also im sorry if there error in the text, my grammar is horrible :( but if theres error or sugestion for the way i put text or paint pleases tell me, i want to get better in making comic and you guy can help me alot by commenting, suggestion and tips. If it help ill take it in consideration. hope you enjoy it.
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xax Says:
'Zmoop' has got to be the best sound effect ever.
You might want to consider spellchecking and grammarchecking the script-- I noticed two words spelled incorrectly in this strip (FYI, 'allways' for always, and 'explotion' for explosion) as well as an incorrect pluralization... that is, you say "destroy each others" when it should be "destroy each other".
Atariboy Says:
Wow! VEry nice coloring on the comic
l33tg4m3r Says:
Love the way the comic started! Selene looks sooo adorable in the last frame! Nice work!
Jirashi Says:
ACtaully..thsi looks Great thus far ^^. I gotta watch you mroe closely amigo...Gawd why are you one when I'm not
...frikkin late nighters *waves a fist*
xerxesdraco Says:
I really like how you did the explotion effects, that's cool.
As for the grammar and text I noticed just the same things as Xax did there.
Painting is better than I could do, so I can't really give advice, but I'll keep watching this!
Toni Serinn Says:
Looking good ^^
rajginkisaragi Says:
Beautiful! I want to read more!
A suggestion though:
Might I suggest that you use a different font for your text? The shape of the letters doesn't really go with the theme of your plot. I'd say either these three: Comic Sans MS, Chalkboard, or Futura. This will help us get pulled into the story better.