Columbine

"Make fun of my clothes
My hair, My style."
But you never know...
Will today be the day you push to far?

Harris and Klebold would agree
"Spielburg and Tanrantino will be
begging over this story"

"Good womes hath born bad sons"
Bullet holes in the banks of blue lockers
Ceiling tiles ajar where kids ran to hide
Dead Bodies in the library

They were a revolution
The victims never again
The bullies, the parents
The stress all compressed

Feel the rage all the hatred
As the shotgun Fired
Breaking your nose
But you don't even feel it anymore

You've been kicked down so many times
You have no self esteem
You feel nothing
As you unload the last round into your temple
You Are A Revolution

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Feb 1st 2005

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I wrote this after i read an article about the whole columbine story.NOTE: when i say those kids are a revolution i don't mean that its okay to go around killing people your dislike. I meant that it was a national lesson to teachers , parents, bullys, students everywhere to be more careful and considerate. maybe pay a little more attention to what you do and say.

Quotes from: Shakesphere, Time magazine and Harris and Klebold themselves

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Nightowl10175 Says:

Wow, that was a perfect description of what i am always trying to tell people. Good Job.

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Sepp Says:

I love this. you're a really great writer

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black phoenix Says:

""Good womes hath born bad sons"
Bullet holes in the banks of blue lockers
Ceiling tiles ajar where kids ran to hide
Dead Bodies in the library" .. i found this stanza to be especially strong.

a bit more punctuation would be nice, but its not needed.

well done, pickles.

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EmeraldTokyo Says:

Ah. The bullies. I was taunted in all my years in school. I know how they felt and how the Teachers and Staff never did anything to help my torment, even after a girl who hated me stabbed me in the back with a pencil. My only hole to hide in was the art room. I refused to go to Gym no matter how much they told me it was a required class. Now I have my revenge ... A Sweet successful life with beautiful children (Worth fighting for) and the bullies are most likely all working dead end jobs they hate or are so miserable with their own lives they drink them away.

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