does anyone care

by Kitsan

in Completed Works

does anyone care

Flowing in the darkness.. nothing but death and never after

A life of wishing nothing but death.
A life of nothing but lies
Eyes hallow with nothing but lies

Never hearing the truth
Always wishing for something else
Never really knowing what we need
Only knowing that we're alone.
We're alone forever mroe

They say that tragic events end with
'And they lived happily ever after'
But what about the not so happy

Are we nothign?
Do they care?
Or are we nothing but a simple object

A object to be torn
To be throw
To be killed
To bleed
To die
To never love
To do nothing but that what we wish

They go on about how murdering is the worst crime
It's only killing someone right?
Well what about those who kill themseleves?
What can they do?
They can't be punished
Only moarned


But they say friends live on in the memory of there loved onces
What happens when they die?
What happens when no more lvoed ones are alive?

they simply fade away
fade away as if they were never there.
and then goes on to the next life.

the same thing repeating..
it's always the same
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Mature Jan 20th 2005
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a simple poem i felt like writting.. it kinda anguished but.. i felt like writting it

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RukiFT Says:

Great poem, it's pretty deep and it makes you think..