Hot Air Balloon

by King Joshica

Dec 31st 2009

I'll be outta my mind
And You'll be outta ideas
Pretty soon
So let's spend the afternoon
In a cold Hot Air Balloon~

- "Hot Air Balloon"- Owl City

A bit smudgy, but nice anyway

I also think it's a little too smudgy... Maybe it would look better if you drew outlines in the foreground. ^^
Nice poem by the way. Is it by you?