Duuurrrrr

by P i m p Hollystika

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Oct 25th 2009
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Working with character design.

DURRR :U


Kinda going back to my old design.

I think I made my shoulders a little too broad and my neck a little long.

Oh well, I'm mostly working with clothes.
Suggestions?

Comments

Dark King Ridley Says:

here's a suggestion for the clothes take em off It looks too much like a suit. What exactly is this character supposed to look like?

My hat is blue Says:

hands are too small mang and pants need moar design

frozen scent of love Says:

NEEDS MOAR VISUAL KEI / JROCK.

AndyXP Says:

You don't look much like a mafia member/pimp


More like a business woman without a tie, and I guess wearing men's clothes.

Or just someone who likes to wear a blazer.

Galloglasses Says:

DEM HIPS


Basically what I said over skype

Moo Sensei Says:

I love the suite, great flow of motion.
Her right shoulder is fine, her left (our left) is too broad.
The crotch is really high up and makes her torso look too short.
Her knees should be down lower and her right leg is turned at a really odd angle, looks almost broken.

Also, I agree with the others, a pattern or texture would help the suite, and the hands look small.

Sorry if I'm overly critical or blunt, kinda rushed, its not that I dislike this.

Triple Q Says:

What everyone else sed

Kiwi Tang Says:

Everyone said everything that needs to be said.

Also, I suck at designing clothes. :U

Chartalon Says:

Tie on her head. :U

Oh wait, I want that.

Arbiter K Says:

I still seriously think you have the knack and talent to design clothing for big-ass shows and stuff. Your style would make a lot of folks very happy.