I'll never understand how you people make such PRETTY gradients in the clothing like that! It's gorgeous and I loves it. The snowflakes are so preeeetty!
The coloring is great yes, but I wonder how many people actually looked past the coloring and noticed the anatomy. What I'm saying is, it's decent and all, but that arm is far too stiff and the hand is, well deformed. She also seems to be missing her collar bone. And the lace over her torso should have definition to it and not blend on the same line level as her skin. All in all, it's a decent picture ^^
It's beautiful! I love the gradient! and the light coloring is absloteley lovely!
Now for some critique:
despite the detail on the dress itself, there's not much detail to the girl in it. The way the arm is in that position is kinda...ruining the grace. and the hand shold be a bit fuller, with more fingers curling up to her palm, since a hand usually doesn't just get held out straight like that.
This is simply beautiful and the colors
PERFECT for the season. Sweet and soft colors.
But...Let's be honest!
I critique honestly to help you.
The hand is well...it looks like a fish fin
you had to add more fingers to it and picture yourself in that stance with that kinda of hand.
It's quite weird to have your hand like that, right?
That and her hand and arm seem stiff!
You must be gentle and relaxed so that little touch of grace will stick on.
Oh! and umm she's got no cones on her! COLLARBONE!
Don't forget it!(Otherwise we would have no support and look flabbyish? or like a turtle?...lol) Oh and the laces, they're lovely but they shouldn't integrate with her skin/body.
They must be different
Ah...OKAY!
Anyways, good job!
Just remember these things
when you are making your calendar, can't wait!!!
Comments
02321 Says:
Oh wow, the colors are just great. So soft and pretty! I'm surprised you don't have more comments!
MithClearwell Says:
blackdeathmessenger Says:
O.o ooooh.....pretty
KakumeyKaguya Says:
The coloring is great yes, but I wonder how many people actually looked past the coloring and noticed the anatomy. What I'm saying is, it's decent and all, but that arm is far too stiff and the hand is, well deformed. She also seems to be missing her collar bone. And the lace over her torso should have definition to it and not blend on the same line level as her skin. All in all, it's a decent picture ^^
DoodleCat Says:
;D my birthday month is very pretty...love the colors.
good to see you post some thing.
otro kidd Says:
wow the colors and the detail its awesome
DarthAnime42 Says:
It's beautiful! I love the gradient! and the light coloring is absloteley lovely!
Now for some critique:
despite the detail on the dress itself, there's not much detail to the girl in it. The way the arm is in that position is kinda...ruining the grace. and the hand shold be a bit fuller, with more fingers curling up to her palm, since a hand usually doesn't just get held out straight like that.
otherwise, bravo!
ailime Says:
simply incredible work !
WalkingDisaster777 Says:
This is simply beautiful and the colors
PERFECT for the season. Sweet and soft colors.
But...Let's be honest!
I critique honestly to help you.
The hand is well...it looks like a fish fin
you had to add more fingers to it and picture yourself in that stance with that kinda of hand.
It's quite weird to have your hand like that, right?
That and her hand and arm seem stiff!
You must be gentle and relaxed so that little touch of grace will stick on.
Oh! and umm she's got no cones on her! COLLARBONE!
Don't forget it!(Otherwise we would have no support and look flabbyish? or like a turtle?...lol) Oh and the laces, they're lovely but they shouldn't integrate with her skin/body.
They must be different
Ah...OKAY!
Anyways, good job!
Just remember these things
when you are making your calendar, can't wait!!!
Akean Says:
The colors are amazing and so are the clothes, but her palm is way too long