I Need Some Critiques Plz

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Sep 12th 2009

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:C

I want to know your opinion on my way of drawing guys (like anatomy, blahblahblah)

APART from the face shape, I'd like to know what I need to improve. C:
The drawing is totally random, I drew in the girls because I needed to fill the space :v it looked too empty without 'em.

You know, this guy isn't a random character. He is somewhat a *secret* character lololololol. I guess its not really a secret anymore xDD
Oh well, there are still SOOOO many art pieces that I don't show to the public anyway : D

Please give me some critiques, but make sure you use proper sentences and not "OMG LOL HIS HAND IS SHORT LOLOLOLOLOL"
Art © Brenda

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noveltywords Says:

I'd say work on the definition of the arms a bit more.

They also have more "stronger" noses than women do, but it also depends on the type of guy you're aiming for.

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Georges angel Says:

I guess it depends on what kind of guy you're aiming for o.o for a sweet innocent guy this looks kinda right but for someone more sporty, you would need to increase the muscle in the arms and lower body and change the pose

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NekoDusk Says:

Lol. hes a cutie >D
but sadly.... i have nothing to say at the moment ;__;.
i critique all the time, but i cant see MAJOR errors that need improvements in this piece.

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melty Says:

defining the muscles a bit more would be good, and adding more wrinkles to the clothes. Everything looks very straight and rigid.

More varied line weight would be cool too, but only if you want lol.

OTHERWISE IT IS COOL.
and i like your face shape c:

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Kai Uchiha Says:

I love how you draw eyes ;D But as for the boy critic, I would say make his torso a bit longer, even if he is still growing men have longer chests (more muscles are just there compared to girls even if they don't work out or anything) and then narrow torsos (not hugely different) and they do have slight curves, just enough to give them a nice "V" shape without looking feminine. <;D I hope that helps, tried to say something different from the critic you already got. BTW looking at the male body without most of the clothes on helps SO much, seeing the muscle and how the body flows really does make a huge difference. ;]

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lovedory Says:

i agree with noveltywords that the arms need a bit more definition instead of just straight.

also i think that your guys could look a bit more masculine. don't get me wrong they look good, but there isn't much definition between a guy and a girl =/ so try making the guys a bit sharper in looks. at least that's my suggestion.

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Shake and pop Says:

Well, Your drawing is very good already, but I'll do my best to critique it for you. :)

I think, that his head in a certain place and his body isn't matching it. His head is on the left, and his body is more to the right... (At least that's what I noticed.)
I agree with the above comments, his arms are really pointy and straight. If you made his arm with a bit more curve and muscle, and his chest a litte bit more defined, not as thin and scrawny (no offence). The shape of his head is a little odd compared to the girls. Like, His head is a standing upside-down egg (like this "|") while the girls' heads are more like a tilted upside-down egg (like this: "\" which looks more proportional). I think your drawing of him looks way too 2-D, very flat, if you know what I mean. If you add more curves, it will look more 3-D.

Well, I hope this helps out.
Your drawing is very good though, so if I said anything that made you feel slightly discouraged, or angry, or ANYTHING, just ignore the post entirely. Just worried about your feelings, is all. :)

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