The final panel here is pretty weak when compared to all the others, even on this page alone. This perspective could work, but the geometry of the scenery is all messy and confusing. They largely suffer from squiggly line syndrome. To boot, everything about Dex just seems off. His hand and arm look scrunched in, and I can't tell how he's laying on the bed. It honestly looks like his body's meld with the foremost bed pole. Neil looks just fine, and a lot of the other background objects are salvageable. Its Dex and the bed that do it more for me than anything.
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foolyguy Says:
The final panel here is pretty weak when compared to all the others, even on this page alone. This perspective could work, but the geometry of the scenery is all messy and confusing. They largely suffer from squiggly line syndrome. To boot, everything about Dex just seems off. His hand and arm look scrunched in, and I can't tell how he's laying on the bed. It honestly looks like his body's meld with the foremost bed pole. Neil looks just fine, and a lot of the other background objects are salvageable. Its Dex and the bed that do it more for me than anything.