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Chapter 6, Page 4
I may go just a LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTLE bit overboard when I draw cobblestones.
So, Helios! As you can see, there are two parts to this city. A nice, clean, prim and proper model on the outside, yet inside is a grim, grimy, dilapidated shell. As such, I like to refer to it as "Two-Face Town".
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foolyguy Says:
Who cares? Those cobblestones look awesome!
Love the toning on this page particularly, very clean and well organized. Really makes the page pop in all the right ways.
Foxcat Says:
2nd panel in the complete version looks brilliant, but in the other panels, the texture tends to draw away from the characters. Like the dust in the last panel effectively drown, hahaha.
It looks great, but I believe you should prolly tone it down an awful lot. Perhaps leaving small patches of stones here and there might establish the gritty floor without drawing attention. Another idea could be to leave a bit of white space and/or don't make any of the background lines connect with the foreground.