little tremors

by old snow MAN

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little tremors

jewel in kimberlite
little shining xenoliths
the fruit of your aeons
in hiding and

little tremors.
there's this stupid saying,
diamond in the rough
but you're already

so brilliant.
The light does not come
from mirrors, do you
not see it comes

from you, your
incandescent burning
light that will soon
shine on

millions.
So don't call yourself
ordinary, don't you
fucking dare

you gem
you ruby
you pearl
you fucking

blisteringly bright
jewel, don't dare
go blinking out, don't
you dare.

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Jul 31st 2009
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hey hey hey hey

forgive me dude

Comments

pbjplatypus Says:

This is absolutely fantastic.

The forcefulness sets such an interesting mood here.

BlueSkiesTomorrow Says:

angry tone for encouragement

The Mad Scientist Says:

Interesting.