Yeah, that neck needs to be shorter/thinner. Zoomed in it looks a little long, while zoomed out it looks like her head should be shifted back.
The left boot should be moved closer to the middle or made bigger, as to me it looks like a horse's leg... (Or if that patch of white between the legs is actually part of the sprite, perhaps the grey line in the middle of the left boot should be a lighter shade)
On the other hand, your shading isn't too bad; the head and torso are shaded pretty well.
Comments
SonicLuigi Says:
I can only suggest that you make the head a little more rounder., and perhaps try to shade the outline alittle
Other than that
I'm crap at giving criticism at sprites
Eureka Thurston Says:
Now edit it so you have all my outfits. :I
Mr Adventure Says:
I think the neck looks a little weird.
Foxcat Says:
Yeah, that neck needs to be shorter/thinner. Zoomed in it looks a little long, while zoomed out it looks like her head should be shifted back.
The left boot should be moved closer to the middle or made bigger, as to me it looks like a horse's leg... (Or if that patch of white between the legs is actually part of the sprite, perhaps the grey line in the middle of the left boot should be a lighter shade)
On the other hand, your shading isn't too bad; the head and torso are shaded pretty well.
Not that bad, really.
The hair seems a little pillow shaded.And the neck is shaped wrong.Other than that you did alright.
Advance Says:
http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/ww349/SuzieAdvance/Other/TripleQEdit.gif
What the hell did I do.
SonicLuigi Says:
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj268/Shardthehedgehog/wat.png
Cool.
Frario Says:
it still needs a lot of shading and highlighting, but I think you'll learn a lot from sonicluigi's edit