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A Place
To notice that you have died,
To know how much you have cried.
When you wish for better living,
You wished for being giving,
When you’re there and you don’t know when,
You wished for a place back then.
Now I’m here without you,
Do you know what I’ll do?
A place for you and me,
Do you think it’s meant to be?
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Comments
Laurelle Says:
I think that your poem would be a little more understandable if you didn't try so hard to rhyme, though I like it as it is anyway.
Also you may want to add words to your poem image, I didn't realize that this was a poem right away.
:)
Birdie13 Says:
Tahts beautiful! Both the picture and poem I lvoe them both!
Bloodangel Says:
That is relly cool it looks like the dark and light angels from DNAngel. Dont you think......SO CUTE!!
Thorne Says:
whoa... i agree that tthe less you try to rhyme, the better it would ne. i write poetry, but i've been forgtin to piut it up, but i almost never rhyme, at least not when you use rhyme scheme AABBAABBAABB, or sopmething annouing like that...
(and it looks almost like daisuke and satoshi sleeping together...*shudders involuntarily*)