Apr 26th 2009
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current Ed style
redline if you want to, just critique me on my anatomy. do not critique on the lineart, coloring, shading, or the fact that it's animu plz.
it would be so much better on paper, but oh well
Comments
Moo Sensei Says:
It looks great so far, simply take the nose up a little, center the mouth and lower it a little bit, eyes are a little uneven
Also, his head is missing in the back.
Other than that, your golden. :>
Tsukasa Fan Says:
I think it looks good :)
I don't know if I was much help... but I tried anyway
but two things I can see, although I'm not very good at crit... one eye seems segnificantly smaller than the other... maybe making it a little bigger?
and his nose seems a little too big... maybe moving the nose edge (the little outside curved line by his nostrile) in slightly...
Carebear33 Says:
I love it!The only thing you need to do is straighten the nose and put it up a little bit.
Kitty Phreak Says:
Other than the
strange nose
I really like it