Tired

by JelmerBV

in Literature

Tired

The world is still turning.
It sometimes seems it's turning without me.
But I don't know if I care,
want to care, need to care.

I try to catch my emotions.
I'm trying to draw them,
but I fail.
I'm trying to write them.

It's hard.
Life is hard.
I don't know if I continue,
want to continue, need to continue.

I'm searching for someone who understands.
I really try to find that person,
but I fail.
I'm searching for myself.

I don't believe in that "one day".
I don't believe in that "one person".
I'm tired of waiting,
and don't know what to do.
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Apr 26th 2009
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Hello up there, Mister Inspiration Guy, I was trying to draw something, not to make a poem!
Ah well, I personally think this one turned out pretty good, I like the 'layers' in it. (If you know what I mean.)

Well, I guess that was all I've got to say about it. (I was only able to make a part of a sketch by the way, I might try to finish that picture someday...)

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vampire Miyu Says:

'tuning without me.'
don't you mean 'turning without me?'
intresting poem, full of emotions and nicely written

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shadowazar Says:

i like it!
it really is a nice poem.

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SaisCy Says:

Ha I had that very same talk with Mister Inspiration Guy not too long ago:P

But it didn't turn out all that bad did it?:-3 I mean, it obviously doesn't make for a very impressive drawing but the poem instead was definitly a good thing..
^^;
Ok so what my babbling up there means in human language, I think this is a really good poem! It's deep and the feeling that comes with it is very recognisable for some reason:blink:

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