Ooo interesting style this time. Any reason for the sudden change?
You managed to do quite a good job showing figures through light and solid shapes. On the first couple panels but it seems to disappear on the last. It's not that bad though since it gives me a better idea of what exactly that one dude looks like.
I also really like the sky line panel's composition a lot! Hoever, the lighting on the building seems a bit off. You should try to cast some shadows from the staircases and window sills in order to signify the shapes rather than simply use lines.
Even if i didn't know what they were talking about I'd already be intrigued
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Sluggy Says:
Ooo interesting style this time. Any reason for the sudden change?
You managed to do quite a good job showing figures through light and solid shapes. On the first couple panels but it seems to disappear on the last. It's not that bad though since it gives me a better idea of what exactly that one dude looks like.
I also really like the sky line panel's composition a lot! Hoever, the lighting on the building seems a bit off. You should try to cast some shadows from the staircases and window sills in order to signify the shapes rather than simply use lines.
Even if i didn't know what they were talking about I'd already be intrigued