okay first off, there is a bit too much feedback and static in the recording, what are you using to record?
and secondly, could use some drums, you sound like you're staying on a fairly good tempo, but drums really help covers.
hope that helps
its funny i was listening to this song when i started to go to this recording. bad recording but still good. sounds awesome i wish i could play the guitar but i still don't have one.
this is awesome you are a great guitarist i have ever heard in my life.....you should really form a band
Wow. This is quite a nice job on this song. I have to ask, how long have you been playing guitar?
your tone sounds like a fucking enraged bee in a glass jar