Twilight Rescene

by Keyaroscuro

in Completed Works

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Feb 4th 2009
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twilight edward bella rewrite manga
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So um...I should be working on a paper about socializing medicine in the United States buuut drawing is more fun. And I got distracted off working on the next Twilite, so I thought I'd try something new instead!

Let's make Twilight more realistic, shall we?

Background story:
Bella moves to Forks, WA, because she doesn't want to encroach on her mother's new life with a husband, and she feels bad that her dad, on the other hand, is all alone. In this version she's a normal girl non-Mary Sue girl with a back story I haven't quite reworked yet...
BUT let's take her through school and all that jazz and then to meeting Edward. Guess what, he's drop dead gorgeous and she's still like OMG he's so cute, but when they go through biology class, she's insulted and thus when Twilite: Biology Class pops in. She plays hard to get, blah blah blah, they end up together AND THEN...

...Bella finally acts like a normal person and decides that SHE'S the one causing too many problems for Edward and that SHE needs to leave him in order to protect him. It's for the best. Suck it up Twihards, that's how it's really supposed to go.

Okay end of story, love you all. I have another page planned, but I think I'll try starting up my own webcomic.

Which reminds me. I MIGHT consider working on a webcomic collab with a comic/manga writer. MIGHT. See journal for further information.

Now I am off to sing in my choir. Buh-bye.

(Note: Edward looks Asian. Sorry, but Asians are HOT.)

Comments

AndyXP Says:

Ha.

Squid Says:

I love you.

Definatlynotjonathan Says:

/is a Mary Sue.

queenfish Says:

I like the idea of making it more realistic. I think you should continue down that road. It'll be very interesting to say the least.

And in all honesty, any person with some common sense wouldn't have started dating a vampire to begin with ... come on, that's like dating an axe murderer D:

applecrum Says:

whoaw! thats deep!^^;

Makire Says:

Finally, Bella gets a brain. Three cheers! I like your lineart, btw. It's very smooth and clean. :]

Keyaroscuro Says:

I know, I tend to be overtly convincing like that. xD