Bittersweet Revenge Chapter 1

by MiyabiTussad

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Bittersweet Revenge Chapter 1

Chapter 1: A Sin To Be Rescued

A young man and a beautiful woman were both quickly running. All of a sudden; an ambush unit by the Red Dragon had stopped them from running. The young man and woman both stopped and looked around. "We're surrounded..." He whispered to his wife. All of a sudden, there was a CRACK! followed by yelling and blood going everywhere on the ground. The couple looked up and saw a young demigod; it was Taven. "Why didn't you two fight back?" he asked. Finally, the man carrying a spear stood up and said: "We don't NEED a reason." He gave a good glare at Taven. "Who are you two, by the way?"
"I am Shun Yun and this is my wife Duan Ehuang. And just who do you think you are?!" Shun yelled, slashing the demigod across the torso. The blood went on Shun's armor and spear. Shun spat in the man's face. "You pathetic, horrible excuse for a demigod!" Shun and his wife both left, leaving Taven in shock.
Just who does he think he is?! Taven wondered. He has no right whatsoever to treat me like that! But...is a really kid person underneath his rebellious heart?

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Jan 9th 2009
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A new fanfic. F-i-n-a-l-l-y! Hope you all enjoy.

OCs
Shun Yun - a brave and rather kind young Chinese man who is a great warrior. Based off of Zhao Yun.
Duan Ehuang - Shun Yun's wife and an Edenian empress. Based off of Diao Chan.

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KakumeyKaguya Says:

Good start ^^