Confusion

by Afish244

in Writings and Poems

Confusion

Was it right?
Was it wrong?
I helped those who needed it.

Was it right?
Was it wrong?
I let a stranger become a friend.

Was it right?
Was it wrong?
While a bond has grown, another seems to be breaking.

Is this right?
Is this wrong?
I hold on tight to both bonds.

Is this right?
Is this wrong?
My muscles ache from grasping.

Is this right?
Is this wrong?
What happens... If I just let go of both?

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Jan 4th 2009
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afish confusion free verse human nature journal lyric narrative society transgressive
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I'm in a bad mood tonight. Three guesses why -_-

Comments

Asmo Says:

the choice to make a new bond and break a different one may or may not be a good choice, but right and wrong are not factors here. all you will know is how it affects you in the end, which can be good or bad depending on how you look at it.

artrocker42 Says:

The choice is hard and I know exactly who and what ur talking about.
We all hope that you make the right choice.

Nyleika42 Says:

wow... i never thought that YOU of all people whould write somethng this depressing.

tobi tis an artist Says:

ummmm....

NegaTwi Says:

Beautiful. :] And everyone has their dark moments, I do especially. *hugs Afishy*

Believe It Its Over Says:

I know you'll make whatever choice is good for you. You deserve a selfish moment afish, you do.