ohhh wow, the lineart's so smooth! i actually love the storyline, even if you say there's none. the expressions are so perfect. especially in the last panel, and in the 3rd. the eyes are simply gorgeous [: i really like all the detail you put on the clothing in the 1st panel, especially in the folds wonderful job, i lovev it : D
Absolutely lovely, especially for just a lineart test. I love the expressions. My only complaint might be a lack of backgrounds (or tone or something), but since it's just a random test, I wouldn't expect that sort of thing.
Is this just a one-time thing, or are you possibly making more (I'd love to see more if you were, even if not from the same story/scene/whatever)?
Anyway,
cool stuff,its nicely done,i like the design on the guys outfit and the shading its all so clean!!
its all so levely!Its a pity its only one page xD
looks amazing, better then a most of professionall artists, there is only one thing that's odd to me, it's an eye on the last expression, for some reasone the eye looks out of the picture, kinda looks like a cyclop, don't get me wrong it still looks awesome, it's just that eye, you know what i mean
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fruitgirl Says:
ohhh wow, the lineart's so smooth!
i actually love the storyline, even if you say there's none. 
the expressions are so perfect. especially in the last panel, and in the 3rd. the eyes are simply gorgeous [: i really like all the detail you put on the clothing in the 1st panel, especially in the folds 
wonderful job, i lovev it : D
Pluere Says:
Absolutely lovely, especially for just a lineart test. I love the expressions. My only complaint might be a lack of backgrounds (or tone or something), but since it's just a random test, I wouldn't expect that sort of thing.
Is this just a one-time thing, or are you possibly making more (I'd love to see more if you were, even if not from the same story/scene/whatever)?
ColorMeWicked Says:
Yup, there will be more. I plan to do a story as soon as I get a break from school, so I'm happy to see you're interested. Thank you! =D
Darky chan Says:
oh,oh!
What did he do???
Anyway,
cool stuff,its nicely done,i like the design on the guys outfit and the shading its all so clean!!
its all so levely!Its a pity its only one page xD
XxxsadxanimexxX Says:
WoW!
If you a story I will read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XxxsadxanimexxX Says:
I mean....If you make a story
sugar ray Says:
looks amazing, better then a most of professionall artists, there is only one thing that's odd to me, it's an eye on the last expression, for some reasone the eye looks out of the picture, kinda looks like a cyclop, don't get me wrong it still looks awesome, it's just that eye, you know what i mean