Always Together

by SallyMusic

in Completed Works

Description

Aug 29th 2008
Tags:
always ballad easy listening miscellaneous piano pop together vocals
Views:
163
Comments:
10
Score:
4
Favorites:
8
This is an old song of mine that I dug out. I wanted to try out my newer version of Cool Edit Pro, so I re-recorded it and here it is. Simple recording of a simple song, hope you like it.

Since posting this, has re-edited it for me, you can hear the new, improved version here :-

http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1930096/

When we’re apart, far away, far away
Look to the stars, up there so far away
Find one that we can share
Then we’ll always be near, always together

When there are words, we don’t have time to say
Distance may try, to keep us far away
Look to the star we share
Then we can be near, always together

And though the days may seem long
And the feeling is wrong without you
But soon the night will be here
And the star will appear for you

Think of a time, when we are far away
Let it be mine, remember it every day
Then when the time is here
We can feel near, always together, together

Comments

ProudOne Says:

wonderful!

nyoseki Says:

very beautiful. :)

Brendan90 Says:

Ah such a nice mellowed out tune thats easy on the ears, great work as always Sally.

BlueEyes Says:

It's so beautiful! :´3 I really like the lyrics. Well done! ^^

Merina Says:

I really like the lyrics, and I love it when you do several voices at the same time.
But personally I prefer a bit lower singing. I think it fits your voice better.
Perhaps you could try making it a bit lower? But only if you feel like it.
Besides that it's a really good song.

DarKsidE Says:

Fucking sheezy art...get a damn new music player already! >:U

After refreshing at least 5 times...I now hear the actual tune...FINALLY...>__>

The vocals are really great! Love em...But everything else...god damn woman! This could have been SO MUCH BETTER if you would take your time mixing!

I mean...come on...the drums? >__< They sound more like 8-bit chops and everything else...sigh. I'm really disappointed that you don't use your full potential here. Gaah. I assume you got some midi files in there as well? (at least that's what it sounds like)

Now don't use that simple song, simple recording argument as an argument...because it's no argument! >:U

In any case...make a .zip or .rar file and send me all your layers that you got on that song to my email adress (in my profile), so that I can show you how much better this could sound liek! (lol)

Womankind...oh why are you so complicated?

wm Says:

awesome singing, and nice chorus as well, faved.

beethovenbd Says:

Nice song, good flow, but as merina said, some high notes sounded a tad forced.

Keahi Says:

This is beautiful. :3

Bozo Says:


You do have a beautiful voice and I liked the melody a lot.I think i will be looking out for more of your work. Well done!