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Lightning
Uncontrolable, frought and with malcontent
Flashes desamating from the west,
Frought and powerful like immaculate tendrils
Crashes and convulsion,
From overhead it strikes the ground by me
nearby earth scorched, deleted,
Blinding and unstoppable,
we know its power
Then the roar, the sinister, shocking rumble,
convulsing... like a bomb, hits you,
cover your ears,
run.
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Comments
StAlbansGirl Says:
Wow, epic...cant help but notice u sed 'convulsion' twice...well convulsion and convulsing which r similar
No biggey, I'm just piccy 