I'm just submitting some art to show you all that I'm not dead!
This is just lineart for now. They're two new OC's and they're twins. :> I'm still not yet decided on their names, but I'm leaning towards Jade for the twin the left and Kit for the one on the right. I'm not sure. Someone give me feedback! :[
Sorry if there are some weird proportions. I spent a gazillion hours on this and I still don't think alot of it looks right. I'm still practicing proportions, especially full bodies, since I don't draw them too often. D: But if you have any crits, please do tell. I won't be able to change them at this stage, but I'll keep it in mind the next time I draw something.
Will be coloured soon. When I get the time. I'm so busy. m(_ _)m And I have so many things to do!
OpenCanvas 4.5 Plus
Art (c) Kim I. 2008 / BakaKimi
Do not redistribute.
PLEASE DO NOT COLOUR THIS. 
Comments
BracingHope Says:
i like the one on the right! he's a bit awkward tho.... i think his torso is a bit too long... idk tho..
Bandy Says:
They're pretty cool! I love the lineart alot.
As for crits I find their legs to be too short. A leg is always longer than an arm~
lovedory Says:
nice ^^ i like the style
Unsung 1 0 0 Says:
Looks like it's going to be good coloured
Grape juice Says:
Yup, its definately the legs. Much too short.
Either twist the torso or make his head almost a side view.
Anyhow, another thing is the guy on the right side...its really hard to turn your head that far around.
Very cute though. I thought of Jared and Evan when I saw them.
Gir94 Says:
i likr the one on the left... he looks like he's easy to undress P:
millktea Says:
wow... drawn very well. nice style.
FluffyErutis Says:
proportion wise, i think the one on the left needs to have a bit longer legs
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haha
even if they're saggin their pants a bit, his knee is a bit too low
i'd say the same with the one on the right, just longer legs
otherwise fabuloussssss proportions like the arms and head
and the perspective with the left leg of the twin on the right looks so coool X3
plus i love how ya inked it!
cant wait to see colouredddd
and i like the names jade and kit, they're just a bit girly, or hipster names
but the twins look hipster, so in that respect the names really fit lol
not to mention bishounennnnnnn
i guess it just depends on what you're trying to show with the names
sunANBU Says:
they're both very cute! =3 and i love their hair!