M-One - They Heard Me
Late Entry for the FAMM May/June Contest
(Luckily the contest closes on the 6th July)
Charleon
came up to me and asked me if I was entering the contest, I was completely oblivious as to which contest he was talking about since I've been away from the Sheezy community for a while, but he told me about it and I decided to work on this beauty straight away.
It started out in my head as nothing like it is now. I'm sure it changed for the better though.
Enjoy listening to this song, and good luck to the rest of the participants! :3
DOWNLOADABLE!!! (just because I'm generous!) =D
Lyrics:
Verse 1
Seems like you are getting older,
Older than you seem to know,
Sometimes I feel like I'm colder,
Seems like you are getting smarter,
Smarter than you seem to know,
But, I'll let you rest on my shoulder,
Chorus
They heard me crying out loud, crying out loud,
They saw you crying out loud,
Did they ever stop to realise what they have done,
Verse 2
Seems like days are getting shorter,
Shorter than you seem to know,
Sometimes I feel like I'm greater,
Seems like I know right from wrong,
Right from wrong seems to know,
That I will be there for you,
Chorus
They heard me crying out loud, crying out loud,
They saw you crying out loud,
Did they ever stop to realise what they have done,
Bridge
What do we do now?
What do we do now?
Chorus x2
Comments
Lord Welshi Says:
Oooh, that sounds really good. Excellent sound to it, catchy, good sound. Nice work!
Athulryes Says:
Good song, I enjoyed listening!
MMX fan14 Says:
I love it! It has so much meaning to it
ProudOne Says:
Unsung 1 0 0 Says:
Sounds nice, You owe me a song
SallyMusic Says:
Very nice, professional sound. I like the subtle vocal octave split on the chorus (see I noticed again!), it gives it a lovely warmth.
Cyril Says:
Oh man.... I don't like the fact that this is gonna win far over my epic metal piece. :( OH well. Great job crazy matt.
I love the lyrics.
ShootingStar Says:
oh, good song. nice to listen to
Charleon Says:
Excellent! The sound, the producing, the mix, the small things that makes the song nonrepetative, it's all there and it's a fact that it sounds professional.
Even if I don't usually like this kind off music you made me interested and I actually listened to the lrics, something i rarely do =)
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
GORGEOUS.
I love the way you use the synth in this piece...it kinda hovers in the background the way it does in some Pink Floyd songs, but it still manages to do something subtle and interesting even though sometimes it's a bit hidden.
I also like the fact that you don't autotune your vocals. You sing well--but you also allow for the tiny little flaws that make you sound human. At least to me, it works to your favor and with lyrics that have a sound of vulnerability, it's appropriate.