As mentioned on AIM, you need to work on keeping your hand steady. Outside of the flaws of anatomy that I had made in the original piece, you only seem to need to work on contrasting your shades more.
Also, the way a line bends can also have some effects on the facial expression. For example, the way you made an over-curve on the bottom of the eyes, combined with slope on the top line of the mouth, gives Ekoi a bit of a frightened expression.
You also gave him a bit of a Weegee chin.
Thankyou again for the gift man. Feel free to use any of my art as references or for practice at anytime. >w<
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Ekoi Says:
A score of -2? Am I really that hated?
As mentioned on AIM, you need to work on keeping your hand steady. Outside of the flaws of anatomy that I had made in the original piece, you only seem to need to work on contrasting your shades more.
Also, the way a line bends can also have some effects on the facial expression. For example, the way you made an over-curve on the bottom of the eyes, combined with slope on the top line of the mouth, gives Ekoi a bit of a frightened expression.
You also gave him a bit of a Weegee chin.
Thankyou again for the gift man. Feel free to use any of my art as references or for practice at anytime. >w<