Forsaken

by Sheeba

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Jun 29th 2008
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animal eclipetigerstarsnight
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I found out how to do stars in Corellllll! 8D


I didn't find out to rhyme goooood! Im very bad a rhyming, as your tell in this.

Well yeah, Eclipse again.

Comments

Tsukasa Fan Says:

poems don't have to rhyme
I likt it
aww... Eclipse looks so innocent

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Fireye Says:

It is very deep and well written. I feel the tension